“Meeting will take place at the Rancozy Hotel, hence I’m going to the Rancozy Hotel.”
What is wrong with this sentence?
Explanation It is redundant, because using the same noun more than once in a sentence sounds unnecessary. In such situations, we make use of pronouns: Meeting will take place at the Rancozy Hotel, hence I’m going there.
Example 2.
“I went there; because I wanted to.”
Find the flaw in the given sentence.
Explanation The given sentence has incorrectly used the semi-colon. Instead, there should be a colon there.
Example 3.
“One is always conscious about how they look.”
Can you spot an error in this sentence?
Explanation It suffers from the pronoun-antecedent error. The correct sentence would be:
One is always conscious about how he/she looks.
Example 4.
(a)In the forthcoming elections
(b)every man or woman
(c)must vote for the candidate
(d)of their choice
Explanation (d); Option (d) is incorrect, because it has a pronoun antecedent error. The word ‘every’ is a singular pronoun, so it mentions every man and every woman singularly, not collectively. But, the pronoun of antecedent of ‘every man and woman’ is ‘their’, so it refers to them collectively. The correction would be – ‘of his or her choice’.
Example 5.
(a)Almost all school teachers insist that
(b)a student’s mother
(c)is responsible for their student’s conduct
(d)as well as his dress
Explanation (c); The correct answer is option (c), because the pronoun ‘their’ used in the statement makes it look like the students belong to the mother instead to the teachers. The correct statement would be: “… for the student’s conduct”.
Example 6.
(a)it is essential that diseases like tuberculosis
(b)are detected and treated
(c)as early as possible in order to
(d)assure a successful cure.
Explanation (d); Option (d) has an error because of the word ‘assure’. Assure (verb) means ‘to inform positively, with certainty and confidence’. For example: He assured me that this drink is safe to drink. Hence, to assure, is to remove the doubts and tell someone something confidently. The appropriate word for this context is ‘ensure’. It basically means ‘to make sure’, so it refers to making sure that something will or will not happen. If used in the sentence, it would mean making sure there is a successful cure for the disease.
Example 7.
(a)If one has to decide
(b)about the choice of a career
(c)you should choose that option
(d)which is really beneficial.
Explanation (c); Option (c) is grammatically incorrect, because of the pronoun inconsistency. The pronoun used in (a) is ‘one’ whereas, the pronoun used in (c) is ‘you’. The correction would be – one should choose that option.
Example 8.
(a)He is the sort of person
(b)who I feel
(c)would be capable of
(d)making these kind of mistakes
Explanation (d); This part of the sentence makes the pronoun antecedent error. The pronoun: ‘these’ used here is for referencing the noun: ‘kind’. Thus, as you can see, it should either be ‘this kind’ or ‘these kinds’.
Example 9.
(a)Sumit found the new job
(b)more preferable to the one
(c)he had left
(d)so he decided to continue for a while.
Explanation (b); We need to choose (b), because ‘more preferable’ is an incorrect phrase. Preferable itself means more desirable than the other, and hence, ‘more preferable’ is a redundant phrase.
Example 10.
(a)Prakash said that,
(b)if he were elected president
(c)and that if funds were available,
(d)he would create a national theatre.
Explanation (c); Option (c) is wrong, because of the use of ‘that’. ‘That’ can be used as a relative pronoun to connect two clauses (but here there is no connection required). It can also be used to introduce the subject of the sentence, but here we have a dependent and difference conditional clauses in which the use of that is not required.
No comments:
Post a Comment